I am learning to add detail to my ideas
My Holiday Story
I went to Auckland in the Holidays
With my sisters we went to my Aunty’s
Home first I played GTA with my Cousin
I had a big kai next I Had a Power sleep for
The games that night. When woke up I went to tenpin bowling it was FUN . next i had a big kai. It was a fun night with my Cousins.
Hi there, my name is Bruno and I am a student in Te Waka Ako at Waikowhai Primary School. I really like That you went ten - pin bowling in the holidays. It made me think of the first time I ever went bowling it was fun but it kept on going into the gutter. Have you thought about writing a little bit more and maybe put a picture if you have any of you bowling. If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://wpsbrunoa.blogspot.co.nz/
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