This is a piece of writing about the Tautoro school Gala.

I am learning to develop independence in planning for writing

Guiding questions: What is my purpose in writing?  Who am I writing for, who is my audience?

On  Friday night I went to  the Tautoro School  Gala.  First, I played the Coin Game but I didn’t win anything.  Then I saw the yummy cakes. They were chocolate with delicious sprinkles on  top.  I bought three cakes. They were as sweet as a lollipop. They were yummy .  I got full on my three cakes. I felt happy because I ate the cakes all by myself. The gala was fun. Finally I  went home. I was tired.