We were at Tautoro i was with whaea Rosina of the kls and teachers.
we had a birthday day I played hopscotch and knuckle bones
I played I hula hoop. And then we had big kai I saw heihei and
saw kumara. And we had a game it was fun.
We playing and it was awesome
After we play on the court
We had a birthday cake wos black yellow and red
It was time for home.
Hi Maui, Good to see that you are improving on your writing every time that I come on your blog every now and then. I really enjoyed reading your story about the 110th hari huri tau for Tautoro School. I think that when you have your free time you can just flick back onto your blog and see where to make the changes. But everything else on your blog I really enjoyed looking at. Keep up the good work. Letisha.
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